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wow, you crushed this prompt

Wendy Russell's avatar

Vonnie, this is gorgeous. I’m fascinated by writing that trusts the reader to swim a little before they fully understand where they are, and this absolutely does that. Half teh time I felt like I was deciphering an ancient fungal hymn and yet the emotional core still landed perfectly -- grief, inheritance, longing for someone who shaped you...

Also: “She did not wait for anything. That is why I want her back.” Oof.

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